I like the design here – it fits in with the genre of your text. The problem is the lack of evidence from planning: Storyboard sheets, narrative structures, audience research and questionnaires. Without them you wont be able to get the mark that I know you are after. Everything that you post needs analysis and comments from you. And all this needs to inform your production process. I am concerned that there is no evidence that you have started filming. At the moment this is a mid to low Level 2. Mr H
I like the design here – it fits in with the genre of your text. The problem is the lack of evidence from planning: Storyboard sheets, narrative structures, audience research and questionnaires. Without them you wont be able to get the mark that I know you are after. Everything that you post needs analysis and comments from you. And all this needs to inform your production process. I am concerned that there is no evidence that you have started filming. At the moment this is a mid to low Level 2. Mr H
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